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anja98
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1Come in... read the story... Empty Come in... read the story... Čet Dec 10, 2009 5:51 am

Veljko

Veljko
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Ko voli priče, ovde ću postavljati pa neka čita...
Ovo bi bila priča nastala u roku od 10-ak minuta pošto je tako rekla nastavnica... Na temu dvoje u pustinji...
Ja sam je krstio:


~ The precious liquid

It was supposed to be the light, a happiest memory of my life, but
rising darkness went to the wings of the steel wings of the beast and
doomed us all. If I knew that would happen, I am sure I would not go to
the meeting in Egypt. When the airplane crushed and was covered by warm
sand of the desert and hot sun beams that were melting during each
second. I was sure we are dying, as we are during each second from our
birth. There were only two people, and only one bottle of water, me and
Angela, two lucky ones that survived the crash, neither can live while
the other survives, it was obvious. Our situation was not the one you
should dream of, certainly it was the one when we needed more luck than
usually. I was a gentleman, I gave her the water, the precious liquid
we need to live, she looked like she needed her more than I do. My body
was weak, like a worm that had to linger through hell. The hell was the
sun, source of all life, not death, which will in this case be. We were
walking for three days, nothing. No water, no people, no life... Then
we heard the warm sound of same steel beast that brought us to the same
ordeal. It was our lucky beast... It just has to look down and spot us
first.

2Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Pet Dec 11, 2009 12:18 pm

Veljko

Veljko
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Moram da updateujem temu.. pošto nema komentara...

3Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Sub Dec 12, 2009 1:59 pm

hari_95

hari_95

Super je

4Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Sub Dec 12, 2009 3:05 pm

*Mare-SBK™*

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Swidja mi se prica xDD

5Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Sub Dec 12, 2009 4:11 pm

Wlajky

Wlajky

Sviđa mi se uvodni deo u priču, mogao si malo da je proširiš u ta tri dana bez vode, da uneseš neka dešavanja.
Inače je lepa ideja i priča (:

6Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Ned Dec 13, 2009 11:28 am

Veljko

Veljko
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Hvala... pisao sam je 10 minuta. -_-

7Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Čet Dec 31, 2009 3:41 am

Tinkerbell Killer

Tinkerbell Killer

Đa mi se :D

8Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Sub Jan 02, 2010 6:17 am

anja98

anja98
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Lepa je prica. xD :D

9Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Ned Jan 03, 2010 10:44 am

CyBeR

CyBeR

Super priča :)

10Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Sub Jan 30, 2010 11:56 am

Sany

Sany
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extra prica...<3

http://rbd-girls-serbia.forumotion.net

11Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Pon Dec 27, 2010 3:16 am

Halloween_boy

Halloween_boy

pre dobrooo je

12Come in... read the story... Empty Re: Come in... read the story... Uto Jan 04, 2011 8:30 am

SaraஜLucero

SaraஜLucero

Uzivala sam

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